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About Me
- The Codester
- I am an Memphis College of Art Alumni with a BFA in illustraion. I'm working on my masters in art education. I'm really looking forward to traveling when I'm done with this program. I love to tell stories. Some say I fly through the trees with the greatest of ease, you decide.
Here in class
4 comments:
The motion and speed work well.
I like the simplicity of your animation, I have a problem with cluttering things. It seems that you could have been a little more creative with the actual text but overall I think it is successful.
you were close to your goal but came off as the old mission impossible. The speed was a little fast and it made it hard to read on the guns. You need to slow the guns down. Also the circle needs to slow down as well. you need slow down and pause at the end were the brass knuckles comes up so the audiance can read it.
Its short and simple, yet entertaining. You could have animated the text a little more but if that is the feel you are going for then Hells Bells. The font is OK for a Maurice look, but I was thinking that you could use a more type writer font to reflect the detective feel that I think this text is describing. I may be reading to much into it since the viewer might not know where the text came from.
I really like your type, speed, and quality of your piece. I enjoyed you guns and background motion though I suggest you to do some more with the type.
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